I agree with everything artifactos has mentioned.
I'm reading in detail the bio of Kelly on the About Us page, but it doesn't mention anything about her being a cyclist or how she died. I think you mentioned on another thread that she collided with a train. Was that while riding a bike?
Why only five years of this ride? You mention on the homepage that this is the final victory ride. Are you about to achieve some fund raising goal and you're done, or was this a limited-time project going in? I'm guessing people would want to support a going concern, not one that's about to fold up shop. That may explain the lack of participation this year.
I do like your 5s list in the column on the homepage. That's clever stuff, but as a Comp teacher, I'm wondering who your outside sources are. I'd like to read more about this 5 character in the Peanuts comic strip.
I like the idea of the Take Five fund raising suggestions, too, but some of them are outdated, making your homepage look dated. Drop the Thanksgiving and Christmas references and add some springier ideas, like having the Easter Bunny support the ride or something.
Maybe add a weekly countdown to the ride for a fund raising goal. One task each week to acquire a new personal sponsor to help reach that $100 goal for each rider. $5 per day is a little vague, especially when you start months in advance and only ask that they bring $100 - that's only 20 days.
I think your About the Ride information is a lot more compelling than what's on the home page right now.
Also, I would like to see pictures of people in the process of the ride itself, not hanging out before and after - you might add some shots of this beautiful Delaware River Valley for people not from the immediate area. (Believe it or not, when folks out on my side of the continent hear "Jersey," beautiful, verdant river valleys don't even enter the picture.)
I may have missed this, too, but some sort of statement from the beneficiaries would make the donations come in, I'd bet. Have some of the recipients of the funds give you a statement about how this money has benefited their communities.
Similar comments from past riders might be nice, too. Something about how they have looked forward to this ride to start their summer every year.
Do you have take-aways for ride participants? Swag bags? What's in them?
I don't see anyone in these pictures with a Kelly's Ride jersey.
Way at the bottom of the Ocean City page, there's a request to bring canned goods for the local food bank. This is in addition to the $100 donations and the $40 entry fee? So, really, it's $140 bucks and a can of beans to enter and do a lot of good for people in the local community and as far away as Haiti? That's actually kind of catchy. Is the canned food request on the entry form?
Who is Kelly's Kids, Inc.? I think as a 501 (C) 3, you're supposed to make your financial statements available to the public. I'd like to know how much money was raised and donated to these three beneficiaries - how much did that building at the orphanage cost, the gym for holistic healing, and how much is the scholarship? How many of those have been awarded? Can you get a statement from the recipients saying something about how much it meant to them?
Good luck!
Roxy
Getting in touch with my inner try-athlete.