??? +1 about the distance.

Not too crazy about the three dog leg sections. Like the long straight way on the top of the drawing. When you come to the end of the straight away, is the turn really tight? or the streets really narrow? Someone is bound to go into the corner "hot" and crash. Sometimes peloton gets caught up in it. Make sure the ending corner for the long straight away has lot of straw bale and "balloon" like crash barriers. It seems every year crash 4/5 men's crit have a serious crash at Manhattan Beach Grand Prix here in So Cal. A long straight away with 50 foot climb, followed by sharp right hand turn and immediate right turn again for 180 degree turn. The first corner someone goes in too hot. goes over the curve, riders following (inexperienced rider will hit the brake) and big-ol pile up. Not pretty. Last year someone broke their arm. year before that someone broke some other bone...

Oh where are you planning to put the staging area/start/finish... I like to see them about 100yards from the last turn.

Let us know how it goes. BTW, I don't race LOL