I really like the concept of that jersey--where we've been and where we're going. Very nice. Very original.
But, I'm not convinced of the implementation. I'm not artistic, but I wonder if you did yesterday on the front and today on the back (or vice versa) instead of trying to squeeze them both on the same side? And/Or maybe change the style more than just black/white--do yesterday ala' Retro Image and do today in a modern style? Hey, I said I had no concept of art...
Oh, and, mayanorange--I keep logging in looking for Version 2. I can't imagine you'll top version 1, but I keep looking...
one less car has been taken.
http://onelesscar.org/
There is one design I really like (not mine) but there are parts of it I don't like.
I would like to see elements of some designs incorporated with others.
2008 Trek FX 7.2/Terry Cite X
2009 Jamis Aurora/Brooks B-68
2010 Trek FX 7.6 WSD/stock bontrager
Thorn- It'll probably be tomorrow by the time I get to it. Should be faster since it's a modification sort of, but I still take forever trying to get these things right.
I'm still not 100% happy with Version 1, but it gets the general idea across. I was hoping for long and winding road starting in green rolling hills or similar, then ending up at a city at sunset, but I couldn't get it look quite right in photoshop. Though now I really like the bike design, so I'm going to focus on that for the next iteration.
I'm totally open to suggestions if anyone has any!
Thorn - That would be a good idea too, splitting the yesterday/today idea into two different images and potentially two styles.
I'm working on the back panel... it's not drawing out like I thought that it might. We'll see how it goes.
I wish that I was able to work it out in illustrator, making changes and adjustments would be easier in that program instead of photoshop.
mayanorange: +1 I like the stylized bike! Very cool.
Zen- I'm so lost... what's up with the tour??
Last edited by mayanorange; 02-15-2009 at 02:54 PM.