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I dunno...that guy looks a little like he is coming down on top of the water when his hand enters, as opposed to knifing forward into the water?

Oh - I do not care for what he does over water, but underwater he's good, and 18:30 is base endurance pace for him....

it looks to me like you are lifting your head a little bit to breathe rather than simply turning it to the side. It looks more this way when you breathe on your left than on the right.

sometimes. I know. I can concentrate on it and it gets better.

After your hand enters the water it looks like it travels too much to the center as it moves forward. I think you want it going straight forward.

Agreed - that may be a combination of a slight "crossing over" and an escape movement, I am working on strength now.