First off, Kimmy you did great for a first race and you had a very respectable time. You beat the Boy and only got beat by one buddy and by 2 min. That, if I remember rightly, means you met most of your goals. So look at your acheivements and be very proud, you did great.
Now, the first race is a learning experience so....

Originally Posted by
Kimmyt
I hadn't practiced transitions at all, so this was all new and left me feeling faintly unsettled.
Practice transitions. You can make up a ton of "free" time doing this and it really only takes a couple of practice sessions of about 30 min to make a huge difference. You can drop a couple of min. That would have put you right there with the other girl, without any actual effort of training.
Swim
At the start of the swim I felt immediately uncomfortable. I sighted for the first short distance, and that tired me out. I should have just swam and then sighted periodically.
Yes. I agree with this. Especially if you're in the crowd, you won't go far off course when you're surrounded by people.
I even backstroked for a few strokes, just to calm myself down.
Very smart. You lose a lot of energy fighting anxiety in the swim. You did well to change things up and relax as much as possible.
Decided it was easier to sight by stoping to tread for a second instead of swimming.
With more practice you'll be able to sight while swimming the crawl. I bilateral breath and sight off my right breath cycle, that means every sixth stroke. That keeps me going really straight and saves a tremendous amout of distance.
Swim time: 00:21:55 for 900m
Good swim I'd say.
.....attempted to put my jersey with bib number on over my wet body. Didn't go so well.
This can be greatly simplified by wearing what you plan to ride in. That may not have been possible since you did not wear a wetsuit, (jersey pockets drag),. The number thing is best handled with a number belt.
T1 Time: 00:02:31 (not bad, considering the struggle)
Very respectable.
Bike Time: 00:54:54, 16.1 mph for 24k (15mi)... after seeing those numbers I'm really unhappy. My times should have been much higher. There weren't that many hills. I'm rather pissed at myself, actually. Maybe I should look into getting a computer so I can monitor this in the future.
Definitely get a bike computer. You need the feedback, especially since you're body doesn't feel normal since you just finished swimming.
The run felt slow. Immediately I was passed by the girl I'd really wanted to beat. I accepted it and ran for myself. My legs felt like lead.
THis is totally normal and I hate to say it, but it never goes away, you just get better at running faster in spite of the sensation.
Overall time: 01:49:59, 335/708 (96th female overall)
Not bad, I had aimed for under 2..... I did beat all the folks I signed up with except the one girl I really wanted to beat. I beat The Boy by about 5 minutes, the other long-legged cycle maniac by 4 seconds, another girl by almost 10 minutes, and only lost to the one gal by 2 minutes.
That's awesome. Pat yourself on the back and have an extra beer.
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