Need help on message to employees
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Hi there
The head of our agency sends out a weekly message to employees, letting folks know what he's been doing, as well as what important things are coming up.
I realize I dropped the ball, and should have had those who put the message together to put something in LAST week (or earlier) about this friday's bike to work day.
However, we thought we'd stick in something for this friday's message saying "thanks to all who participated".
This email goes nationally, although I'm not sure who in our other offices take part in bike to work day organized events. So, I want to put something in that's pretty generic.
Do you have any thoughts on how I can beef this up? It needs to be BRIEF (like 1 short paragraph).
Here's what I have so far:
"I want to congratulate and thank everyone who took part in today's annual Bike to Work Day - 2007. Bike to Work Day caps National Bike to Work week, highlighting the month of May as National Bike Month. Thousands of commuters took to the streets today in a celebration of bicycling as a clean, fun, and healthful way to get to work. I appreciate those who try bicycling to work as an alternative to solo driving."
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