Academic help anyone? (Canadian Law)

Hi, ladies!

All of you are very smart and I trust your positive attitudes and honesty.

I've just completed my first assignment in my business law course, and wonder if anyone here would be willing to read through it and comment before I send it to my tutor for grading.

It's 14 pages double spaced - 5 essay questions, one short essay question and 4 short answer questions. You'll probably want to skip over the ten multiple choice questions.

I'm mostly looking for feedback on if the sentences make sense, and if I seem to have explained the concepts reasonably well. Because it is a course about Canadian Law, I imagine there will be some inconsistencies compared with the principles of law in the US.

If anyone is interested I can email the pdf or word document....

Thanks so much!

Hugs and butterflies,
~T~